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    My Daughter's Portrait

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    My Daughter


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    Please comment on anything you like...I am here to learn

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    Hi Raffay,

    That's a beautiful portrait, her smile is captivating.

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    Very good. I can't see anything wrong with it that I can mention. Keep going.

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    Another one

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    Please comment as much as possible technical points, that will improve my pictures.

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    I would have gotten down on her level to shoot this one, not only to make her the main subject of the photo but also to avoid cropping out the ends of her feet. This would also have benefitted from some kind of fill light, maybe just a big reflector, because she's in shadow.

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    Two words. Consider subscribing.

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    Thank you everyone for your comments. Trying to improve with every picture I take, and the comments help a lot.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Raffay View Post
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    Razzel 900, Rodenstock 127mm
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    Developed in D23

    Please comment on anything you like...I am here to learn
    you don't need advice. you are doing just fine and better than most;certainly better than I with portraits;beautiful girl and a fantastic picture;well done indeed!
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    The background is slightly distracting and a darker background may improve impact, but apart from that almost perfect (the model helps). Oh yes and you may show slightly more space to the right rather than the left

    “The contemplation of things as they are, without error or confusion, without substitution or imposture, is in itself a nobler thing than a whole harvest of invention”

    Francis Bacon

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    Nice! Hope you get a chance to print it in the darkroom.
    "Photography, like surfing, is an infinite process, a constantly evolving exploration of life."
    Aaron Chang

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