and now a few years later ... having stumbled upon this thread (isn't the internet great?) ... I agree with some of what's been said. Distill to three or four images. Write a paragraph to accompany and voila, a bonafide photo-essay. I think Nancy has a point, too, in that a good shot that says "Dan-Dancing," in an immediately-accessible way, is lacking from the series. Some good shots of him in awkward postures but nothing that immediately speaks dancing. Everything else is there and in spades. I wouldn't mind seeing what you've done more recently (and maybe I'll give a look around).