looks like a great scene for spilt-grade, and you've done a good job here
keeping the balance light, especially in the second print.

usually I'd use the #0 to tone down highlights, just enough to
keep from turning them grey, sometime a pre-flash helps as well.

And usually there's always the internal debate about which to do first,
time for the darks or the lights? These days I tend to do the darks [#5] first.

Keep it up!