Keep in mind that I am not holding the images in front of me and my monitor is not the greatest

Of the images posted I find the first to be the best but I think it needs
  • A bit more space so the head and elbow to not connect with the outside of the frame
  • If those are white sheets I want to see them white so when you print you might bump up the contrast some. As it is they are a little too grey for my taste.
  • Agree with the hand looking like a foot. Hands are always troublesome

I like the story it tells

Image number 2 seems a tad lacking in emotion for me but it not a deal killer. Once again I want the subject not connected with the frame at the bottom.

I think 3 and 4 are too under exposed to comment on.