The bottom part looks sort of "unfixed" to me. Why don't you try fixing it some more?

The uneveness, etc, sort of bothers me, what is your method of processing (standard tank, or your own machine, etc)? Do you have previous experience developing film, or is this a first? (If you've done good quality previously, this would show that you understand the basic technique.)

Note: it's probably better to describe your method as "mixing from chemical components," or the like, rather than from bulk chemicals. To me, "bulk" means relatively large quantities

If you don't have a way to screen all of your chemicals, and are not experienced with the C-41 process, it might be a good idea to initially buy a small quantity of a commercial mix. One by one you can try swapping your homebrew chemicals in place, to see if it gives the same result.