Hi, Fellow Professional!
Thank you for your comments. They are appreciated!
I realize that this release is not "of standard form" - it was not meant to be. Unfortunately, there are those who will ABUSE the idea of good faith. This was meant to protect both photographer and model ... and intended for use primarily in "Fine Art" (read: "Nude Figure Study") photography. Commercial work may well require something different.
I would be interested - do you think anything detracts from the "protection" of the photographer, or affords any inappropriate "power" to the model?